Writing a Thesis Statement Flaws in the Foundation

Beginning writers tend to make the same mistakes in writing thesis statements. These mistakes are as deadly to an essay as flaws in the foundation are to a house.

Vague and Boring: What Can Be Done?

Building a home can be hard.

There are several things a person can do to save money when building a house.

My essay will be about building a house.

It can be a challenge.

The subject of my paragraph is log cabins.

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